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Good evening, Bruce, and welcome to the Literature department of the University of Woolloomooloo.  Bruce and myself have been spending some time going over the works of Bruce McMaster Bujold, particularly the Vorkosigan Saga, about the adventures of one Bruce Vorkosigan.  This week we look at another chapter in the novel CryoBruce, where, in Chapter 12, Bruce tries to figure out what happened to the real body of Bruce Sato, Bruce and Bruce’s mother.  So crack a beer, sit back, and enjoy the Vorkosigan Saga Reread.

Chapter Twelve

Miles just barely kept himself from blurting, idiotically, Are you sure? Neither set young face held the least doubt. “Then who,” he choked, wheeling to stare at Raven, at the draped figure on the table, “was it that we just . . .” Murdered was unfair, as well as inaccurate. And, he suspected, would also be deeply offensive to the upset cryorevival specialist. “That we just . . .” Fortunately, no one here seemed to expect him to fill in the blank.

Raven says the numbers matched the ones Miles gave him, which meant that either he got the wrong drawer number, or somebody fudged the numbers somehow, either to deliberately hide Lisa Sato’s body, or by accident; the last possibility is so depressing that Miles discounts it for now.  Or, it occurs to him, they might just have been pre-empted–somebody else might have substituted a body for Sato’s.

Trying to stick to facts they can actually obtain, he asks Raven to identify the actual body; Vorlynkin reminds him of the presence of the children, and Miles realizes he should deal with them before they get too disturbed.  He takes them back outside and apologizes to them, saying that he still wants to find their mother, he just needs more information.  They ask him if they’ll have to go back to their aunt and uncle, and Miles says they can go back to the consulate with Vorlynkin, until they turn up some more data; he’ll go back there after he helps with the cleanup.  He tells the Consul to get Johannes to look for Lisa Sato’s acquaintance Dr. Leiber, the only solid lead they had.

Roic, awakened by the commotion, emerges from the room he’d been bunking in and asks what’s going on; Miles brings him up to date, and is rewarded by a particular type of Armsman-bland that conveys Roic’s opinion of the situation; he reinforces it by noting that they could have been on their way home by now if they’d left after the meeting with Wing, though Miles notes that they can’t stop now.

They go back into the lab, where Raven and Tanaka have cleaned up from the aborted revival and are preparing for the autopsy; Tanaka asks if they still get the free revivals, and Miles says he’ll hold to that, since they’re likely to be back.  Raven asks if they want to send samples to a commercial lab, or make do with what equipment they can scrounge; to do the job as good a commercial lab, he’d need to bring in some of his team from Escobar, which will take longer.  Miles says he doesn’t want this information getting out yet, so he tells Raven to go as far as he can without help, and then they’ll reassess; he tells them his theory, that this was a deliberate substitution, and he hopes that this woman’s identity will lead them to whoever took Sato’s body in the first place.

He notes the possibility that Lisa Sato might never have been frozen at all, and Raven comments that that seems a needlessly cruel thing to do to her children; Miles says that it might have been more dangerous for her to stay with them.  Tanaka, inspecting the woman’s wrapping, mentions that it’s the kind used decades ago, back when she was a student; Miles presses her for more information, and she says it was used from about fifty years ago to about thirty.

Jin and Mina are quiet in the lift van back to the consulate; Vorlynkin apologizes to them for the mixup, and Jin says it’s not his fault.  Vorlynkin says he’d have been furious if his daughter had been the one dragged into this; Mina asks about his daughter, and Vorlynkin says she’s on Escobar with his ex-wife, her mother.

“Why are you divorced?” asked Mina. If they’d been sitting together, Jin could have kicked her in the ankle to shut her up, but unfortunately she was out of reach.

Vorlynkin shrugged. “It wasn’t anyone’s fault, really. She was an Escobaran. I met her when I was stationed at the embassy there as a junior secretary. When we first married, I thought it was understood that she would follow where my career took me. But by the time I was offered the promotion and the transfer to the Barrayaran embassy on Pol, Annah had come along. And my wife changed her mind. With a baby to look out for, she didn’t want to leave the security of her family and her homeworld. Or she didn’t trust me enough. Or something.”

He says that now she’s remarried, and her new husband wants to adopt Annah, and he wonders if that’s for the best; Mina says she’d want her real  daddy, and Jin says that it’d depend on if he was a nice guy.  Jin asks if he couldn’t have just refused the transfer, being a diplomat rather than a soldier, and Vorlynkin says that he’d made the choice back then, though he’s not sure he’d make the same choice again.

Back at the consulate, Vorlynkin gets them some food, then Mina goes upstairs with the cat while Jin goes to check on his creatures; afterwards he goes upstairs too.

As he sat on his bed and plotted his recapture of the cat, Mina sniffed and said, “They lied.”

“Grownups always lie.” Jin brooded. “Mom lied. She always said everything was going to be all right, and it wasn’t.”

Mina drifts off to sleep, and Jin sneaks the cat away from her and goes to lie on his own bed; he wishes he were back at Suze-san’s, and wonders if he should have left Miles in the street after all.  He dozes until awakened by Roic, a couple of hours later, who asks him if he can come to look at something on the comconsole.  Roic waits until the kids are ready and leads them downstairs.

Now that he was getting used to the big man, Jin kind of liked Roic. For Miles-san, it must be like owning your own private grownup, following you around and doing stuff for you. Except you got to tell him what to do, instead of the other way around. Jin wished he owned a Roic.

They go down to the room in the basement with all the spy equipment, where they join Miles, Raven, Vorlynkin and Johannes.  Raven is using a machine that he identifies as a DNA scanner, which he is happy to find at the consulate; Miles calls them over to his comconsole, where he’s brought up pictures of different Dr. Leibers for them to look at.  Mina has trouble deciding between them, not having caught more than a glimpse of the man and that years ago, but she is sure that he had black hair and was old, at least thirty.  They narrow it down to two men, and Mina thinks it’s probably the skinnier one, but Roic says it’s probably that’s as far as she’ll be able to help them; Miles points out that the skinny one works at NewEgypt Cryonics, while the other is an obstetrician, so he’s inclined to pick the skinny one.  Roic notes that this Dr. Leiber seems to have taken the corporate route rather than fleeing like Miles had predicted, but Miles says they just need to find out the whole story.

Meanwhile, Raven and Johannes have found a DNA match, with a picture that matches the cryocorpse they’d failed to revive; she seems to have been a woman named Alice Chen, frozen about 45 years ago, and they have a wealth of information about her from the public database.  She seems to have had a blood disease, probably why she was frozen, though Raven says it shouldn’t have affected her revival, and the disease is curable these days.  Miles wonders again why she was switched with Lisa Sato, which is now his working theory; Chen was frozen at a different facility and moved to the Cryopolis later, and then swapped with Lisa Sato.  Mina asks if somebody stole her mommy, and Miles says it looks that way, but hastens to reassure her that that means they probably cared enough about her to keep her safe.

Miles says the next step is to meet with Dr. Leiber, somewhere outside of work; Roic says he needs a proper perimeter this time, and Miles agrees, and says he can even take Johannes along.  He adds, to the children, that if Dr. Leiber is a solid lead, then they’ve definitely earned payment as informants, and couriers as well, even if Jin was captured before he could finish his job.

“You propose to pay them adult rates?” asked Vorlynkin. Jin thought he sounded more startled than disapproving, and hoped he wouldn’t try to talk Miles-san out of this wonderful idea.

“Damn straight.” Miles-san added, “My case budget allows for a lot of discretion, you know.”

“Then I wish you’d buy some,” snapped Vorlynkin. He shut his mouth abruptly, as if startled at what had fallen out of it.


I’m not sure why Raven suggested going to a public lab, since it must be clear that Miles wants to keep this all on the hush-hush; he seems a little more practical than that, being a Jacksonian and all.  Perhaps he’s thinking that a sufficient fee will be enough to ensure their secrets are kept, or perhaps he’s just pessimistic about what he can achieve with limited equipment.  Unwarrantedly, apparently, since he’s able to identify her just given the DNA scanner and comconsole access at the consulate.

Not sure about the significance of the conversation about Vorlynkin’s divorce–character-building?  Thematic resonance?  Surely it doesn’t come into the plot later or anything…  I suppose that Vorob’yev got a romance somewhere in the back corner of Cetaganda, but I just wasn’t sure that we were devoting that much attention to Vorlynkin.

This is the point of the book where I begin to lose track of why we’re doing this.  It’s like in Komarr, where we started out looking at the soletta disaster and then kept spending time on the embezzlement at the terraforming station, until, luckily, it looped back around.  Miles was sent to Kibou-daini to investigate this new cryocompany setting up on Komarr, and now he’s chasing after a frozen protester who happens to be the mother of a runaway he bumped into by chance.  Why does he think that this is going to pay off, again?  I’m all for serendipity, but I guess what I prefer is for the protagonist not to be counting on it paying off.

Come back next week for another installment of the Vorkosigan Saga Reread…probably with less lame Monty Python references.  There’s still several more chapters before I ring down the curtain and the book joins the choir invisibule…

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I almost went out to see a movie tonight, but luckily I was spared this horror and was able to devote my time to finishing up this blog post for you, my readers.  I did not have to see Jupiter ascend, or any King’s men, or any shadows of grey, or anything like that.  Instead I was able to focus on the Vorkosigan Saga Reread, covering another chapter of Lois McMaster Bujold’s novel CryoBurn, the last (to date, and for the foreseeable future) of her novels of Miles Vorkosigan.  In this chapter, Chapter Eleven, things go off easily…maybe a little too easily.  Or do they?

Chapter Eleven

The body-stealing expedition sets out at high noon, rather than the stormy midnight Roic had half-hoped for; they drive a lift-van into the NewEgypt facility, and are passed without even having to use the floral excuses they’d come up with.  Miles explains that it’s visiting hours, and they don’t want to offend any potential clients; they’d be more worried about vandalism at night, or theft from employees.  Roic, Miles and Raven are dressed in hospital uniforms, Roic’s a little small and Miles’s too big; they drive to the loading dock to deliver their frozen corpse, which they unload on a float-pallet in a hidden insulated body-bag, and Johannes drives off to park the van.

They make their way through the facility, encountering a few employees and visitors but arousing no suspicion, Miles guiding them to their destination using a map on his wristcom.  Miles picks an electronic lock in an underground passage, which leads them into an unfinished, less well-lit corridor; this area is designed like four concentric circles with spokes crossing them.  Miles guides them to a more finished corridor, not as flashy as Roic was expecting, and counts his way to the prospective drawer, whose serial number Raven confirms.

Miles gives them his electronic lockpick and heads off to turn off the power to this section, which turns out to be the best way to conceal opening a single drawer; as he trots off, Raven and Roic open up the body bag and wait for the lights to go out.  When they do, they open the drawer and Roic lifts out the body within, then slides in their replacement with Raven’s help, hoping the difference in the wrappings won’t be too noticeable.  They exchange signals with Miles confirming that all’s gone well, and he reactivates the power, while Roic and Raven clean things up and hope that any techs coming to check out the failure won’t get there too quickly.  Miles returns and urges them on, visibly enjoying the activity, and they manage to make their way back out just as the sound of technicians is drifting down the corridors.

They arrive back at the exit without incident, and summon Johannes to pick them up; by the time they’re loaded and out of the facility, Miles notes that it only took sixteen minutes.  Roic and Miles, looking less Kibou than the other two, stay in the back keeping an eye on the body, making sure it doesn’t roll around and get damaged.  Roic says the whole thing reminds him of Sergeant Taura, and wonders if they should have frozen her, too, when she was dying in the Durona clinic; Miles recalls that they all failed to talk her into it.

What, wake up, still a freak, in some strange place and time, with all my friends gone? Taura had said to the protesting Roic, in that terribly-wrong-for-her thready voice. But you could make new friends! was an argument that had failed to move her, in the exhaustion of her failing metabolism.

Roic made a helpless gesture. “You could have overridden her. After she was too far gone to tell, ordered her cryoprepped.” God knew m’lord was capable of riding over any number of other people’s wills.

M’lord shrugged, face sobered in the shared memory. “That would have been for our benefit, then. Not for hers. But Taura chose fire over ice. That, at least, I had no trouble understanding. High temperature cremation leaves no DNA.”

She’d been indifferent to where her ashes would be scattered, except not Jackson’s Whole, so m’lord had provided a burial plot for her urn in his own family cemetery at Vorkosigan Surleau, overlooking the long lake, a task m’lord and Roic had seen to personally.

“Nobody,” muttered Roic, “should die of old age at thirty-standard.” Certainly not such a blazing spirit as Taura’s had been.

Miles muses about whether their current lifespans will seem unreasonable, if anyone really gets this life-extension thing figured out.  He notes that even if nobody’s body aged, it’s been calculated that 800 years will be a likely median lifespan before encountering a fatal accident of some sort; he adds that even those who worry about dying don’t seem to consider all the time they didn’t exist before they were born, which Roic doesn’t want to think too hard about.

They wait at the lab for hours as the bring Lisa Sato’s body temperature up to almost freezing; Johannes goes back to the consulate, and Miles and Roic take turns napping in a nearby toom, with Raven and Tanaka also alternating shifts.  By dawn they’re ready to start, replacing the cryo-fluid with synthesized blood, which improves the frozen body’s colour immensely; the blood, being wholly artificial, lacks the body’s built-in antibodies, so it’ll require some time in isolation to build up the immune system.

Miles is allowed to watch the procedure, but only with a sophisticated medical mask keeping him from becoming a source of contagion.  As the operation proceeds, though, Raven becomes concerned about the lack of activity in the brain; they try applying electric shock to the head, but then Raven announces that this isn’t working.

The bottom fell out of Miles’s stomach in a sickening lurch. “Raven, you can’t stop.” My God, we can’t afford to botch this one. Those poor kids are waiting for us to deliver their mother back to them. I promised . . .

“Miles, I’ve done over seven thousand revivals. I don’t need to spend the next half hour jumping on this poor woman’s corpse to know she’s gone. Her brain is slush, on a micro-level.” Raven sighed and turned away from the table, peeling down his mask and drawing off his gloves. “I know a bad prep when I see one, and that was a bad prep. This wasn’t my fault. There was nothing I could do. There was nothing I could ever have done.” Raven was far too controlled a man to throw his gloves across the room and swear, but he hardly needed to; Miles could read his emotions in his set face, the more fierce for the sharp contrast with his usual easy-going cheer.

Miles asks if he thinks it was murder; Raven points out that people do die in these things, but he supposes that in Miles’s vicinity the odds are a little different.  He plans to do an autopsy to find out exactly what was done to this body, because something didn’t seem quite right, and he doesn’t like being set up for failure like this.  Miles goes over to look at the inert body, and wonders how he’s going to break the news to Jin and Mina, that the false hope he gave them is now gone.  He’s now extra-motivated to avenge her, though.

A knock on the door proves, unfortunately, to be Vorlynkin, with Jin and Mina; Miles slips out of the room, blocking the door, and reminds them that they were supposed to wait.  Vorlynkin says that they couldn’t bear to wait any longer, even if they could only see her through glass, and he thought he’d let them at least catch a glimpse in hopes it would settle them down.  The consul swiftly figures out that something is wrong from Miles’s mood, though he doesn’t ask out loud.

Miles is not ready for this; he’s broken the news of death before, but never to children like this.  The children can also sense something from Miles’s mood, so he can’t hold back any longer.  He tells them that their mother probably died in the cryoprep, months ago, and that there wasn’t anything they could have done.  In shock, the children still insist on seeing their mother, at least, and Miles agrees reluctantly.

He slips back into the lab and asks Raven to make her ready for her children to see her; Raven is shaken at the prospect, but they clean her up hastily and then let the children in.

Jin and Mina and Vorlynkin filed through. The look Vorlynkin flicked at Miles in passing had very little love in it. Jin took the consul’s free hand as they came up to the tableside. Because who else was there left to hang onto, in this spinning hour?

The children stared some more. Mina’s lips parted in bewilderment; Jin raised his eyes to Miles with a half-voiced Huh?

Drawing back in something between outrage and scorn, Mina said, “But that’s not our mommy!”


After reading the previous chapter, I decided to read a little ahead, so I did the first part of this chapter, the body-snatching.  I thought that it might be exciting, perhaps.  Instead, it was dull as dishwater.  They make their way into the facility unremarked, they find the cryocorpse just fine, their plan to interrupt the power works fine, they make the swap, and they get away clean in mere minutes.  Ho hum.  I didn’t finish reading that chapter until I was ready to start this week’s entry…though my wife reminded me that something went wrong with the body…

So I guess it is a nice twist for the body to be the wrong one.  That part works well, the cryorevival going badly, and the tension of Miles not wanting to have to tell the children about it.  It’s a palpable relief, really, when Jin and Mina point out the mistake.  Except that, thinking about it, it’s maybe too much of a fake-out, like one of those Disney movie scenes where you think for about thirty seconds that a character is dead, and then they regain consciousness and everything’s okay.  Not quite that bad, but it transforms a tragedy into an inconvenience, making the reader feel foolish about having begun to feel sad for the children or anything.

Starting with no immune system seems like more of a problem than they make it out to be here.  They say something about having to isolate someone for a few days until their marrow begins making antibodies on their own; I certainly hope that it’s followed by a rigorous schedule of vaccination, or else you’re still going to catch everything once before you build up those immunities again.  I suppose that medicine is advanced enough to deal with that by this point, so it’s not a big deal, but it seemed like an oversight.

More moving, really, is the mention of Taura’s death.  It was almost a relief, when I read this, to find that Taura’s long-delayed death had finally caught up to her.  As an author, you have to prove you’re serious about killing off characters that you’ve given a short time to live, or else there’s no point.  You’re just a chicken or something.  Step up to the plate and kill off them characters.


So now they have to find Lisa Sato’s real body, or, failing that, some other clue about what was going on.  I guess this counts as a try-fail, then; how many are they up to now?  Where do we start counting?  Next week we’ll see what they do next…

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As our scene opens, we see a new blog post arriving on the Internet.  According to the caption, the blog is something called the Vorkosigan Saga Reread; from previous information, you realize that this means it probably has to do with Lois McMaster Bujold’s Vorkosigan Saga…but what?  Could our intrepid blogger be trying to summarize and make insightful comments on the books in the series, a chapter or two at a time?  Right now it seems to be close to the end of the series, in the book CryoBurn, though of course the series is theoretically open-ended, so who knows what will come in the future.  The lights go down, and we begin the chapter…

Chapter Ten

With Jin’s anxious guidance, Johannes brings the lift van up to the rooftop menagerie, and under the canopy, hopefully to conceal their activities from anyone watching.  Ako, who’s been trying to feed the falcon, is waiting for them; Miles and Jin get out to talk to her alone.  Ako is happy to see Jin back, at last, and Miles thanks her for her efforts looking after the animals.  Jin says that they’re going to be moving the animals somewhere else, and Miles says that he needs to talk to Suze first.

Rowan, Roic and Johannes emerge from the lift-van, and Jin introduces them to Ako, assuring her that they’re offworlders, not cops.  Raven joins Miles and Jin (Roic staying behind with Johannes, under protest) to head inside; Miles picks up some coffee in the kitchen, and they head up to Suze’s room, where he asks Jin to let him do the talking.  They knock on her door, and Suze greets them blearily and suspiciously, grumpy as always, but the coffee seems to sway her to let them inside.  She says that Miles seems to have recovered his resources, and Miles says he’s back in business, on an investigation; Jin assures her that it’s some kind of insurance fraud, and Miles reminds himself to tell him sometimes what his real job is.

Miles says he wants to talk to her about using her facilities; Suze says they don’t want to draw attention, and Miles says he doesn’t either.  Suze asks if he wants to illegally freeze someone, in a way that makes Miles think that she’s done that before, and he wonders if she’s used that to help secure their protection, but she refuses to confirm this.  Miles says they want to revive someone instead, which takes her aback; he assures her that Dr. Durona has the necessary skills, and they just need some facilities.  In lieu of money, Miles offers them another free cryorevival, which Suze finds a startling, and tempting, offer; he shows them his own needle-grenade scars as proof of Raven’s skill, omitting that he was only assisting at the time.  Raven suggests that they make up a list of candidates and he’ll figure out which ones have the best chance.

Suze considers it for a while, and Jin implores her to do it; she asks why he cares so much, and Jin says that they’re going to bring his mother back.  Suze says that Lisa Sato will draw attention if nothing else does, but Miles says they’ll take her back to the Barrayaran embassy right away, so any attention should end up focused there first; Suze says they’ll still want to find out who unfroze her in the first place.  Miles makes vague promises to give them something more important to worry about first, his plans being far from firm yet; he notes that Madame Sato may have to recover from cryoamnesia first.

Miles…turned again to Suze. “I need one more favor. I’d like to borrow a cryo-corpse.”

What,” Suze began in a towering tone, which weakened to, “. . . kind?”

“Female, about fifty kilos. As young as you have available. Anything else, Raven?”

Raven shook his head. “That should do it.”

“We undertake not to damage her in any way that would compromise her future revival,” Miles went on, hoping he didn’t sound too airy.

Miles notes that there will be some risks in their operation, and Suze is less than reassured, so he ups his offer to two free cryorevivals; eventually she gives in and sends them on to Vristi Tanaka, the medtech, and says she’ll go along if they can get Tanaka’s buy-in.  Miles promises her it will be interesting, since he can’t bring himself to promise that she won’t regret it.

Jin leads them up to the infirmary on the second floor; Tenbury is outside, and greets Jin warmly and Miles and Raven warily.  Jin says they need to see Tanaka; Tenbury says she’s busy preparing, and Raven says he’d like to see it.  Jin introduces Raven as a doctor from Escobar, which doesn’t reassure Tenbury that much, but Miles goes ahead and knocks.

Tanaka opens the door, a woman of an age with Suze, also pleased to see Jin but expecting him to be bringing news of another person hurt by his animals.  Jin says Suze sent them, and it’s kind of urgent, and introduces his companions yet again; Miles mentions the plan to use their facilities for a revival.  She looks askance at Raven, and Miles wonders if they should have made him look less respectable so he wouldn’t look quite so out of place.

An old man is in cryoprep, his brain being chilled and his blood replaced with cryofluid; Jin stares, and Miles belatedly wonder if the boy finds it disturbing, perhaps a reminder of what happened to his mother, or if he’d seen it before.  Ako asks if they’re getting a real doctor, and Miles explains that they’re just visiting.  Raven asks about the provenance of the cryofluid, a crucial part of the process, and Tanaka says it’s black-market fluid, past the use-by date; Raven allows that might be okay if the date was conservative in the first place, and Miles thinks that they don’t have much choice about it.

They finish prepping the body, and load it onto a float pallet, where Tenbury prepares to take it down to storage; he invites Jin to join him, but Jin prefers to stay in the infirmary with the others.  While Ako cleans up, Miles trots out his pitch for Tanaka, heavily implying Suze’s approval already given, and letting Jin chime in to implore their help.  Tanaka is dubious, but mostly because she’s not sure how much functional equipment they have for revival purposes, but she can go look.

Miles asks about Suze, and Tanaka says her full name is Susan Suzuki; Tanaka, Suze, and her sister were the three founders of the scheme, with Tenbury added soon after.  She’s surprised it’s lasted this long, since it started out as just a symbolic protest, but the street people needed their services, and that’s kept them going.  Ako came to them after her great-aunt got sick, and she proved a willing worker, so she was allowed to help.

They go upstairs to look at the revival facilities, mostly gutted, but with one functioning operating room; Tanaka and Raven consult in upbeat-sounding medspeak, which requires Tenbury to be brought in.  Miles asks who legally owns the building; Tanaka says it’s a contractor, who only found out about the cryocorpses on the premises after he bought it, and now he can’t sell it because of the legal liability.  Suze has him under control, but they’re afraid that someday he might try to get rid of the place by burning it down; they just keep going day to day.  Tenbury returns upstairs, and the inspection continues; Raven eventually says that it should work out, with some improvising.

Miles asks Raven when he’ll be ready for the operation; he says he’d like to bring Raven along on snatching Lisa Sato’s body, if he’s up for it.  Raven isn’t afraid of arrest, knowing Mark will get him out if Miles doesn’t, and they can go any time; Miles says he’d rather do it sooner than later, both to get home sooner and give himself time to deal with whatever complications arise from Sato’s revival.  Raven says he’ll stay there and get things set up, and encourages Miles to take Jin and the animals back to the consulate; he will want to use the tight-beam later to contact Mark and/or Lily, because he thinks he’s found something of interest to the Duronas.

Back at the consulate, Mina is happy to be reunited with the cat, Lucky, and Jin shows her the pet rats as well; Vorlynkin admires the falcon, and the chickens seem happy in the green grass, while Roic unloads the terrariums against the back of the house.  Lucky ingratiates himself with the Consul, and Mina convinces them to keep Lucky inside, as long as she and Jin look after her.

Miles-san strolled past. “All shipshape here, Jin? Then I need Johannes back.” He added to Consul Vorlynkin, “We’ll be in your tight-room for a time. A lot of detail-work still to do.” At his gesture, Roic rose and took up what seemed his accustomed place at his shoulder.

“Is your scheme going to fly, then?” Vorlynkin asked. Miles-san nodded. Vorlynkin grimaced.

Miles-san returned a wry smile. “Flexibility, Vorlynkin. That’s the key.” He trod indoors, swinging his cane. Jin and Vorlynkin stared after him.

Vorlynkin voiced Jin’s own half-formed thought: “Was that supposed to be reassuring?”


Suze seems really shocked at the offer a free cryorevival, like there’s someone that she has in mind, and Miles knows it; he seems not to be surprised by her reaction, but I guess I missed this.  Who is frozen that she wants back?  Another scene spent outside of Miles’s head so he can keep secrets from us.  Suze is fairly old, so maybe someone frozen when she was younger?  Not sure.

What did Raven find that he thinks the Duronas will be interested in?  Well, the actual quote is “I may have found some elements of interest to the Durona group, here.”  Is “here” the secret cryofacility, or Kibou-daini itself?  Is it to do with the cryorevival?  Some piece of equipment?  The whole cryocorp scam?  Not sure if this comes out later or not, though I do know that we do see Mark before the end of the book, so perhaps it does.

So Miles goes ahead and manages to talk everyone into doing what he wants, getting Suze and Tanaka to go along with his idea, having Jin’s buy-in because he wants his mother back, and of course generally being able to order the Barrayarans around from his rank and Raven because of whatever deal he made with Lily.  Raven is really part of the secret preparation he made for this mission, part of the background that we haven’t been actually told about because most of the flashbacks have been on Roic’s part.  Even when we get Miles’s point of view we don’t get to see much of his plan; he’s turned into an unreliable narrator for this book, which is frankly a little annoying after the previous books, where we tended to get deep inside him and his head.  Maybe that’s one of the several reasons I’m not as fond of this book.

Next chapter: the actual body-heist.  Now, some excitement!  At last!  Or, rather: next week, some excitement!  At last!

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All right, it’s my move now…I roll a five, and head down the hallway and into my blog.  I suggest that it was myself, on the blog, with the Vorkosigan Saga Reread.  Does anyone object?  No?  Then, I accuse myself of the Vorkosigan Saga Reread on my blog.  As evidence, I present the following, which devotes itself so a chapter of Lois McMaster Bujold’s novel CryoBurn, latest chronologically in the Vorkosigan Saga, in which Miles and Jin are reunited and Miles begins to plan some shenanigans.

Chapter Nine

When Jin knocks at the door of the consulate, he and Mina are hustled inside by Lieutenant Johannes, who runs downstairs after seating them in the kitchen, before Jin can even get a word out.  Consul Vorlynkin comes up, as expected, but then a really tall Barrayaran, whose arrival almost conceals that of Miles-san.  Jin’s first words end up being accusation of Miles-san abandoning his creatures, but Miles assures him that he left Ako in charge with a list of instructions.

“And who are you, young lady?” Miles-san addressed Mina. “I don’t believe we’ve been introduced.”

“Sister,” muttered Jin. “It wasn’t my idea to bring her.”

“I have a name,” Mina pointed out. “It’s Mina. Want to see my blisters?”

Miles-san didn’t even blink. “Sure! Are they good ones? Have they popped yet?”

“Oh, yes-they made my socks all bloody, too.”

“Well, Miss Mina, why don’t you sit down here–” Miles-san pulled out a kitchen chair with a flourish, and half-bowed Mina into it, as if she’d been a grownup lady, “–and show me.”

They peel her socks off her feet, while Miles sends Johannes to find something suitable for the kids to eat and drink, which ends up being vat-octopus pizza; Vorlynkin brings a first-aid kit, and gives it to a slim man named Raven, an Escobaran doctor, who deals with Mina’s feet.  Mina asks Miles about Roic, who looks like a policeman, but Miles assures her that Roic works for him now, and so isn’t a real policeman anymore, which reassures her; Roic gives them some water to drink.

Jin finally gets to tell his well-rehearsed story about what happened to the money he was sent with; when he’s done, Vorlynkin says they traced the envelope to police evidence rooms, which supports his story; Miles says the Consul is grateful that Jin didn’t bring him into it, which Vorlynkin unwillingly corroborates.  Miles then skillfully extracts the story of their escape from their relatives, and when the story’s told Jin almost feels like he’s told too much.  Johannes returns with supper, and mentions that the children have been reported missing; Jin protests that they can’t turn them in to the police, and Miles says that they have no intention of doing so.  Vorlynkin says that they can’t harbour runaways, though Jin protests that he needs to get back to his animals; Miles suggests, half-seriously, granting them asylum, though Vorlynkin says that it’s out of the question.

After the meal they go downstairs, and Miles says that he’d looked into what happened to Jin’s mother, and he wonders if they know how she ended up being frozen.  Jin, uncomfortable with the topic, says he doesn’t know much about her work, since she mostly left them at school or with their aunt while she was out, which Aunt Lorna didn’t always care for; they weren’t allowed to go along to the meetings themselves.  Miles muses that he always got to sit in on his father’s meetings, which was very educational, but they were held in his home; Jin says that they didn’t have room in their apartment, so the meetings were always somewhere else.  Mina says that she remembers one time some people came over late at night, not long before she was arrested, which Jin slept right through; Mina heard them arguing in the kitchen.

“Can you remember what they were arguing about? Anything at all that was said?”

Mina scrunched her face in thought. “They were talking about the corps, and money. They were always talking about the corps, and money, only this time they seemed more excited. George-san’s voice was really boomy, and Mommy was talking all fast and sharp, except she didn’t sound mad, exactly. And the new guy yelled something about, it wasn’t any temp’rary setback-this could bring the corps to their knees, right before he came out in the hallway on the way to the bathroom and found me. And Mommy let me have an ice cream bar and put me back to bed and told me to stay there.”

“Do you know who the people were? Had you ever seen them before?”

Mina nodded. “There was George-san, he was always nice to me when he came to pick up Mommy. And old Mrs. Tennoji, she always wore a lot of perfume. They called the new one Leiber-sensei.”

Miles says that they must have had some sort of secret; he’d run across Tennoji and George Suwabi in his research, though no Dr. Leiber.  And those two are dead now, so they’ll have better luck waking up Lisa Sato to ask her.  Mina is galvanized at the prospect of getting her mother back, but Miles backpedals a bit, saying that he can’t just order it done, like he could on Barrayar; Mina says it’s mean of him to suggest it if he can’t do it.  Miles and Raven muse about the possibility of actually doing it–medically it seems feasible, if they can just get hold of her, assuming she was prepped properly in the first place, with the right supplies and facility.

Vorlynkin is disturbed at Miles’s train of thought, but Miles points out that it would solve a number of problems; most of his lines of investigation seem to converge on Lisa Sato, and it would also solve the problem of what to do with her children.  Mina, distressed, asks what they’re talking about, and Miles says that he thinks their mother would know something useful about the case he’s working on, and tells her that Dr. Durona is a cryo-revival specialist.  He says they have a doctor to revive her, now they just need to get hold of her, which he thinks he can do, and that’ll leave Consul Vorlynkin to keep her from being taken away again.

Miles asks Vorlynkin what actual protection the consulate can offer, if they need to, and Vorlynkin says they’re not quite a full embassy but more than just a consulate, so there are some ambiguous legalities; Miles says that that in itself will help them stall for time if necessary.  Jin watches Miles, wondering what exactly his “Auditor” job amounts to–something to do with insurance?–and whether he really can get their mother back…

After finding out from Johannes what vehicles they have available, Miles announces that they’ll be sending the lift van to pick up Jin’s animals tomorrow; Jin isn’t sure why they don’t just let him go back, but he supposes he’ll be fine wherever as long as he can have his menagerie.  Vorlynkin is dubious about hosting the animals, and Jin tries to assure him that they’ll be fine.  Miles adds that while they’re there, he’ll check out whether they have a working cryo-revival facility there already, which will save having to rig one up at the consulate.  Jin suggests they go early in the morning, when Suze will be sober.

The next step, Miles says, is securing Lisa Sato, who is apparently at NewEgypt’s facility in Northbridge.  Roic, alarmed, asks if they can’t just buy up her contract, but Miles says that they’re surely alert to any interest in her, and it would tip them off; though they can look into it later, to try to legitimize the operation.  Raven points out that they’ll need to fudge the readouts so they won’t notice the body’s gone, or just swap in another corpse; Miles muses that they might be able to get one of those from Suze as well.

Vorlynkin choked. “Do you have any idea how many different crimes you’ve just rattled off?”

“No, but it might not hurt to make up a list, should your lawyer need it. Could speed things up, in a pinch.”

“I thought the task of an Imperial Auditor was to uphold the law!”

Miles-san’s eyebrows flew up. “No, whatever gave you that idea? The task of an Imperial Auditor is to solve problems for Gregor. Those greasy cryocorps bastards just tried to steal a third of his empire. That’s a problem.” Despite his smiling lips, Miles-san’s eyes glittered, and Jin realized with a start that underneath, he was really angry about something. “I’m still considering the solution.”

Jin wondered who Gregor was. Miles-san’s insurance boss?

The discussion is interrupted by Mina starting to cry; at Miles’s urging, Jin comforts her, and Vorlynkin urges that they be sent to bed.  Miles agrees, suggesting they bed down in Roic’s room, and this plan is swiftly executed.  Once they’re left alone, they open up Lady Murasaki’s box and toss her in a dead moth to eat.  Mina asks if he thinks Miles can really get their mother back, and Jin says he’s not sure; he’s privately a little daunted by the unstoppable force Miles-san has turned into.

Roic is glad that M’lord has enlisted Johannes, as this will give Roic some backup at last, though Johannes is beginning to look a little out of his depth at all this covert ops talk.  M’lord says that they’ll have to tell the clerk Matson that the children are protected witnesses, and is amused at Vorlynkin’s distaste at having to lie.  Vorlynkin asks him about the risks the children are under, and questions whether they wouldn’t be safer with their legal guardians; Miles says that Lisa Sato may be a dead end, but if not, then it may be risky to wake her up.

Roic’s own conviction was that as soon as that poor frozen woman had intersected m’lord’s orbit, this chain of events had become inevitable. Worse than dangling a string in front of a cat, it was. He likely shouldn’t explain this to Vorlynkin; an armsman was supposed to be loyal in thought, word, and deed. But not blind . . . ​

Vorlynkin asks Miles if he’d want some offworlder to treat his own children that way; Miles says that if he were dead and Ekaterin frozen, he’d be happy for anyone who could reunite her with them.  He’s also reminded of his father’s experience, having his mother executed in front of him by Mad Emperor Yuri; Jin’s is similar, except that, since his mother isn’t really dead, he doesn’t get to actually mourn her.


Miles’s ease at dealing with Mina definitely shows his experience of parenthood; he mentioned to Vorlynkin later that girls seem to want their wounds appreciated, which does sound like a wee overgeneralization.  Of course, Miles was able to deal well with Nikki even before becoming a parent himself, so maybe it’s just his instinct to treat them as people rather than obstacles or chores; there was also the story he told Nikki about using a young girl as a courier.

Is it a bad sign that the children are wary of policemen?  I mentioned before that we don’t have a clear impression of how corrupt they are, but assuming that they’re not too obviously so, they still seem to be obstacles.  And they view the children as problems to be solved, rather than people whose goals are worth considering.  Which, again, is something Miles seems better able to avoid.

He is definitely manifesting a cavalier attitude toward the laws of Kibou-daini.  On Barrayar, of course, he’s above the law, or makes the law, or something, but here he really only has control of the Barrayarans, if that.  What kind of diplomatic incident would be caused if he were to be arrested doing something illegal on Kibou-daini?  It would be quite a loss of face for Gregor, because Miles’s Auditorial status makes his actions Gregor’s direct responsibility; perhaps he’d even be forced to grant concessions on Komarr to the Kibou.  Or maybe Vorlynkin could smooth the whole thing over, but considering how short-staffed his consulate is, his resources are a little limited.  So Miles is taking a substantial risk here.  But he seems confident…perhaps it’s that his opponents don’t seem to have done anything too overtly violent so far.  Unless what happened to Lisa Sato’s co-conspirators was their doing, which is far from clear.  But if he’s got them snowed with his seeming willingness to be bribed, they won’t be expecting action from him, so he’s got surprise on his side for a little while, at least.


Next week, nextchapter…well, probably back to the secret community we saw before, and we’ll see if Suze is on board with this plan….

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A motion is upon the floor, to publish another installment of the Vorkosigan Saga Reread.  Said reread will contain a synopsis and brief critical discussion of one (1) chapter from the novel CryoBurn, by Lois McMaster Bujold, featuring her recurring protagonist, one (1) Miles Vorkosigan, as well as sundry other secondary characters.  Motion seconded…all in favour?  Sold!  To the lady with the battle-axe.

Chapter Eight

After buying some milk, Jin and Mina find a garden shed behind an empty house to hide during school hours; it’s taken longer than he thought to cross the city, and he’s afraid that they got turned around during the last day and a half.  They did find water to drink, and bathrooms in public parks, at least.   While Mina sleeps, Jin finds a wolf spider, and he ends up waking her up digging out her coin box to use for a spider house.  They discuss what to name her, and eventually settle on Lady Murasaki; after sharing a lunch bar, they refill their milk bottles with water.

Mina asks how long it’ll take to get back to his place, and Jin admits he doesn’t know, and hopes that Miles-san is taking care of his animals; he also hopes that Miles-san can forgive him for losing his money.  Mina asks if he has any children, and Jin isn’t sure, especially since Miles-san is so strange-looking he might have trouble finding a wife.  Mina says that maybe he’ll adopt them, like in a book they read for school about a man from Earth who adopted some children; Jin says he’s from Barrayar, but that might be just as good, he supposes.

A sudden picture bloomed in Jin’s mind of the odd little fellow living all alone in a cottage in the country-no, better, a big rambling old house with a vast overgrown garden. Like the book with that old professor who had taken in two children from the city during wartime-Jin didn’t know what war, except it was from a period before anybody got frozen. There’d been a horse that drew a cart, and wonderful adventures involving a cave with blind white fish. Jin had seen a horse in the Northbridge Zoo, once, on a class field trip. The braver children had all been allowed to pat its glossy neck, while one of the keepers held its lead; Jin remembered the huge beast blowing air out its soft, bellowslike nostrils in a warm whoosh across his cheek. Jin understood there were littler versions bred just for children, called ponies. Mina wouldn’t be scared of one that size. The looming beast at the zoo had alarmed even Jin, but he’d been younger then, too. A great rambling house, and animals, and . . . ​

It was all rubbish. Miles-san wasn’t a professor, or their uncle of any kind, great or regular, and for all Jin knew he lived in a cramped city apartment and wasn’t lonely at all. Jin decided he didn’t like that country daydream. It hurt too much when it stopped. He frowned at Mina. “Nobody’s going to adopt us and take us away from here. That’s a stupid idea.”

Mina isn’t happy about that, and they put on their shoes and socks, Jin feeling a little guilty of his sister’s blistered feet, then start walking again.  They pass a tube station, and Mina offers to pay their fare, but Jin reminds her of how he got caught the last time.  He does find a map, though, so he can figure out where they are, and is shocked to find they’ve gone much more east than south, and haven’t gotten any closer to his building than they’d started.  He does notice, though, that they’re close to the Barrayaran consulate; if he goes there first, and explains about how he lost the money, they may be able to give him more to give to Miles-san.

The Barrayaran party returns to the consulate, dialogue subdued on the limo ride by Aida’s presence and Vorlynkin’s quiet anger; Miles takes some headache medication and then they head downstairs to debrief in the tight-room.  Vorlynkin has already locked himself inside, though, and when he finally lets them in, he tells Miles he’s too late.

A muscle jumped by Vorlynkin’s scowling mouth. “I just sent a full report of what I witnessed by tight-beam to General Allegre at ImpSec HQ, Barrayar. I never thought I’d live to see a Vorkosigan sell himself for money. My career may be slagged, but so will yours, my Lord Auditor.”

“Ah, excellent. That’s done.” M’lord kicked the door shut; it sealed with a sigh that seemed insufficiently dramatic for Vorlynkin’s mood.

Miles says that he’d been more afraid that Wing wouldn’t come through, and he’d have to go through it all again; Roic, wary of Vorlynkin’s growing fury, encourages m’lord to stop baiting him and let him in on what’s going on.  Miles says that he’d been going to great lengths to seem bribable, and Vorlynkin, suddenly enlightened, asks if this is a sting operation; Miles says that it is now, though he hadn’t been sure what he’d find when he got to the planet.  Vorlynkin apologizes in chagrin for the report he just sent, and Miles says that he hadn’t been sure that Vorlynkin wasn’t on the take either, and this proved a good test.  Miles asks Raven for his report, which mostly just supports the infrequency of cryorevivals, and Vorlynkin then realizes that Dr. Durona is also working for Miles.

Miles tells Vorlynkin that WhiteChrys had been vetted by ImpSec and they found nothing suspicious, but they may have been looking for the wrong things.  But when they were setting up on Komarr, and collecting cryocontracts, Empress Laisa Toscane’s business-savvy great-aunt became suspicious of receiving both a sales brochure for a cryocontract and an offer to buy stocks.  Something about it sounded off, and she brought it to Laisa and Gregor, who agreed, but none of them could say what the problem was; thus it got dumped on Miles’s lap.

Komarr’s voting system had, from the beginning, awarded more voting power to those who enhanced the habitability of the planet, which has accumulated in the wealthier families; it now seems that WhiteChrys is trying to acquire those votes for itself through cryocontracts.  Komarrans are no stranger to vote chicanery, and there are certain rules, like corporations being unable to hold voting shares themselves, so the WhiteChrys attempts seemed harmless, but Miles now suspects that they’ve worked out some way around it, through legal loopholes or outright bribery.  He couldn’t figure out how they could make any short-term gains, though, until Wing mentioned being cryofrozen on Komarr; having the WhiteChrys representatives cryofrozen, likely taking turns, will give them the timeframe necessary for the takeover of Komarr to progress during their extended lifetimes.

They still need more information, though; in particular, Miles suspects that it may be a subgroup of WhiteChrys employees who are handling the Komarr scheme, gutting the home company in the process.  Vorlynkin asks how they can do anything about it on Kibou-daini, and Miles says he rather prefers trapping them on Komarr instead, closing their loopholes and leaving them stuck running a mere low-profit service company.  Miles asks Vorlynkin about the probity of the other consulate staff; Vorlynkin says he has no reason to doubt Johannes or Yuuichi Matson, but he admits they haven’t really been tested before.

“Yet routine travel visas for WhiteChrys personnel have been handled through the consulate all this time.”

“Yes, but all we ask is business or tourism? Plus a quick background check for criminal records.”

M’lord’s eyes crinkled in speculation. “I wonder if we should add a box to tick off–Reason for travel: creepy planetary conquest . . . ​no, I suppose not.”

Vorlynkin asks what would have happened if he hadn’t tried to turn Miles in, and Miles said he’d have been excluded from the briefing and added to his list of targets.  Just then, Johannes informs them over the intercom that his child courier has turned up again, with company, and they head for the door.


I don’t know particularly what books Jin and Mina are thinking about.  The one with the old professor sounds like it should be a real one, at least–makes me think of The Lion, The Witch & The Wardrobe, actually, though of course that had more children and more fantasy kingdoms, and less cave fish.  The other one, with the man from Earth, could be something made up out of whole cloth.

Here, finally, we get to the real plot; WhiteChrys planning to use the vote-proxy cryocontracts to take over Komarr.  It’s not clear to me how much power the forces of democracy (even oligarchically-weighted democracy) have on Komarr under Imperial control, but perhaps part of their takeover scheme is throwing off Barrayaran shackles…?  Yeah, probably not, that sounds a little too risky for these Kibou.  But yeah, I could see WhiteChrys attempting to present them with a fait accompli and the Emperor just sending in his troops.  Barrayaran law is, as mentioned previously, more concerned with the spirit than the letter of the law, which must make it a bit of an oddity on the galactic scene.  If the Komarran populace was also not happy with their votes being accumulated by corporations (or their representatives, which might get around the no-corporate-votes law), then they’d probably be fine with the Emperor overruling them, and backing it with Imperial forces.

If I were those guys, gambling on sleeping away the years, or decades, or centuries, until their plans come to fruition, I’d actually have been expressing a little more interest in cryorevival.  After all, they’re going to want to reduce the risk of botched revival as much as possible.  I suppose that if they get frozen under controlled conditions, they’ll already be in better shape than someone being hastily frozen under combat conditions and suffering severe bodily trauma, but there’ll still be risks.  Not to mention that there will be plenty of opportunity for backstabbing when your partners in crime are helpless in suspended animation.  So, all in all, sounds like a stupid plan to me.

Eleven chapters (plus the all-important aftermaths) left in the book.  Meanwhile, I’m five chapters (plus an epilogue) away from finishing reading Captain Vorpatril’s Alliance to my son.  That’ll probably take me a couple of weeks…and then I’ll be reading him the same book I’m summarizing here.  Yeah, I’m going to overtake myself, aren’t I?


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It is happening again.  That blog you like is going to come back in style.  Or at least produce another new post, which is to say, this one.  The Vorkosigan Saga Reread did not, in fact, kill Laura Palmer, but it is attempting to summarize and provide insightful commentary on the books of Lois McMaster Bujold’s Vorkosigan Saga, and it is now on the home stretch, in the last book chronologically, CryoBurn.  (And recent statements by the author have not indicated any particular plans for a new book in the near future.)  This week we go through the sixth chapter, in which people are reunited and other people run away again.

Chapter Six

Roic is relieved to actually talk to m’lord, but wonders why he insists that Roic bring Dr. Durona along with him.  Raven says he’d been planning to pick up his luggage and then leave, but Miles encourages him to stay, pointing out that there are daily jumpships; he even evinces willingness to pay for Raven’s time.  By midafternoon, they are being dropped off at the consulate, where Roic craves shower and sleep; the police had fed them, albeit only ration bars.  He nobly holds off, though, until he can speak to m’lord, and Johannes guides them to where Miles has taken over the basement secure-communications room.

Miles greets them both, dismisses Johannes, and debriefs them thoroughly; after they’re done telling their story, he says he’s glad Raven is all right.  He’d hoped the Duronas would send Rowan, but Raven says she’s too busy, heading up the Cryonics department and preparing for the birth of her and her husband’s second child; Raven says she hardly gets to do any real work, and reminisces over Miles’s eighteen-hour cryorevival, back in the day.  Miles confirms Roic’s suspicion that he’d invited Dr. Durona to come to the conference, though Raven notes that they’d been planning to send someone anyway, though more likely a junior resident.

Miles asks Raven if he saw anything interesting; Raven says the technology seems standard, though he notes they’re more interested in freezing people than thawing them these days.  Miles says the cryocorps are mostly interested in accumulating their “patrons'” proxy votes; he notes that the political atmosphere seems full of debate, noisier than Barrayar or Jackson’s Whole, even with incompetent crazies like the N.H.L.L.  Thanks to their interference in the conference, though, he has loads of new questions.

He tells them his own story, about the Cryocombs and the illicit freezing operation; Raven is unimpressed and doesn’t give them much chance of success, but Miles says that the cyrocorps don’t seem to feel too threatened by those kinds of operations.  In fact, the only thing that did seem to frighten them was Lisa Sato’s organization, which they put a lot of effort into breaking up; in fact, his research has turned up the fact that several others of them seem to have died or been frozen.  What he can’t find out is why, exactly, they were thought to be so troublesome, since somebody seems to have done a good job of expunging all that information.

Roic asks what all this has to do with Barrayar, and m’lord says it’s too early to tell; he’s reminded of the Emperor’s warning about Miles’s tendency to “expensive knight-errantry”, and wonders if he’s supposed to try to keep it in check.  Consul Vorlynkin arrives with news about Jin’s legal status; there’s nothing they can do, legally, because he’s not an orphan, but at least he has been released from police custody into that of his relatives.

“Damn!” M’lord slumped. “Damn. I hope Ako proves a more faithful zookeeper than I did.”

“Well, it’s not as if we could kidnap him,” said Vorlynkin, with a faint smile. M’lord eyed him. Perhaps thinking better of this mild venture into humor, Vorlynkin cleared his throat and went back to looking bland. Roic wondered if he should take Vorlynkin aside later and warn him not to say things like that around m’lord, and not because the Lord Auditor might take offense.

Roic suggests that they sleep on it, since m’lord doesn’t look any better rested than he does; he asks, knowingly, if m’lord has checked his neurotransmitter levels, and Miles mutters unconvincingly.  He dismisses Raven to go back to his hotel, though not without a secured wristcom; he laments his lack of data.  He tells Vorlynkin that if WhiteChrys or one of the other cryocorps calls looking for him, he’s to pass on that the Lord Auditor is furious with the disruptions and ready to go home and complain in the Emperor’s ear; he assures Vorlynkin that this is a test to see how much the corps want to stay in his good books, and he encourages the consul to consider bribes, if they’re offered, as long as he tells Miles about them.

They go up to the consulate’s guest bedroom and Roic prepares the seizure stimulator as Miles gets undressed; he asks m’lord if he’s supposed to be trusting the consulate staff, and Miles admits he doesn’t know, based on past experience.  He encourages Roic to sound them out when he’s not around, and see if he can come to any conclusions about them; it may just be a question of whether or not anybody thought the Barrayaran consulate staff was worth buying before now.

Roic triggers the seizure, which is a longish one, and the aftermath is, as always, unpleasant for m’lord, probably good to knock him out for at least a day, if not two.  M’lord goes to bed finally, his energy thoroughly drained.

Jin awakens in his sister’s darkened bedroom with chagrin, having wanted to stay awake to try to outwit his captors–his aunt and uncle–but had been too tired.  He’s wearing nothing but his underwear, neither of his cousins being a match in size, and he doesn’t know where Aunt Lorna took his clothes.  The window doesn’t open, Uncle Hikaru having put a rod in to block it opening further after an argument at supper.  When he’d run away last year, he’d just gone out the window, gathered up his animals from where his aunt had exiled them outside, loaded them in an old stroller, and gotten away clean.  The door is locked too, leaving with only a bucket for any bathroom needs.

He wonders if Miles-san is looking after his animals, and whether he’d blame Jin for losing his money to the police, or if he’d just think Jin had stolen it.  He makes vague plans to hide a screwdriver or something in the room to try to break the locks, though he’s not sure he knows how to do that; he knows he should wait until their suspicions are lulled, but he can’t make himself stay here that long.  Soon they’re even going to sign him up for school, which will be even harder to escape from.

The door opens, and it turns out to be his sister, Mina; Jin growls at her, asking what she wants, expecting something annoyingly trivial.  Instead, she asks if he’ll take her with him if she lets him out; caught off guard, he refuses at first, then changes his mind when she starts closing the door again, and insists they talk downstairs.

Mina asked, “Do you remember Daddy?”

“Sort of. Some.”

“I don’t. Just his picture in the family shrine Mommy set up.”

“You were three.” Jin had been seven when their father had died. Four years ago–it seemed half a lifetime. He remembered his mother’s extravagant grief and anger rather better, and how seldom he’d seen her after that–as if one death had stolen both parents, even before the policewomen had come for her. “Doesn’t Aunt Lorna keep the family shrine anymore?”

“She let me keep it in my room for a while, but then we ran out of space when I needed a desk for school, so she boxed it up and put it away. I wasn’t sure if to set your picture in it or not.”

He tells her again that she can’t come with him, even as she’s putting her shoes on; he says it’s too far, and wonders why she’d want to go anyway.  She says her cousins tease her a lot, though Jin doesn’t see why that should upset her so.  She says she wants her own brother, she doesn’t want her aunt and uncle to adopt her, like they’re planning.  She says she’ll scream and holler if he tries to leave without her, and he realizes she probably isn’t bluffing; she adds that she has saved up some money, too, and helps him find his clothes and shoes, so he gives in.

Mina is a little uncomfortable being out in the dark, but determined; she mentions Aunt Lorna’s threat to have Jin frozen as a repeat runaway, and Jin says she was probably just making that up to scare him.

An unwelcome memory rose in Jin’s mind. It wasn’t the clammy smell of the night that triggered it, because the policewomen had come for his mother in the daytime, but the clammy chill in his gut that day had felt much like this. Mom kneeling down, gripping his shoulders, saying, Jin, help look after Mina, all right? Be a good big brother, and do what Aunt Lorna tells you.

Jin had given up on that last when Aunt Lorna had insisted that he get rid of all of his pets, yes, all, a clean sweep, there was no room and they smelled and pooped too much and that bird was homicidal and to top everything, Ken was supposedly allergic to Lucky, who was too lazy to scratch anyone. Jin just figured his cousin was doing all that sniffling and blowing on purpose, to be annoying, in which he certainly succeeded. Jin had forgotten the first part of that maternal parting . . . ​blessing, curse, whatever it was, because, after all, nobody yelled at Mina they way they’d yelled at him and his pets.


Maybe I missed it, but while Roic talks about Miles checking his neurotransmitter levels, all we see him do is just trigger his seizure.  Does he not normally check?  Was he just sure that it was time?  Or did he just figure that it was better to get it out of the way now anyway?  I suppose he’s used to them by now, but not, apparently wholly reconciled to them yet.  Did they get any worse after the whole Cetagandan bioweapon incident?

I suppose it’s not that surprising that Raven is there because of Miles, or at least partially.  Even if the Duronas probably owe more to Mark than they do to Miles, he does have a few favours he can call in.  I suppose that Lily is over Miles now, given that she’s married to an Escobaran and has children, but it might still have been nicer to see her instead of Raven.  For one thing, there’s a shortage of female characters; I suppose there are a few so-far minor characters back at the illicit cryohouse, but the Barrayarans are, of course, all male.

It’s a bit weird to be getting Roic POV when Miles is around.  It’s like the author is deliberately trying to keep us out of Miles’s head.  When we were in his head, he was thinking more about his current situation and speculation, but from what Roic saw there’s some kind of scheme going on, Miles trying to invite bribery from the cryocorps and all that.  It’s time to unpack, Miles.

Jin’s aunt and uncle totally sound like the Dursleys, except that there are two Dudleys…and Jin’s sister in the mix.  We don’t get to actually see any of them except the sister, though, just vague second-hand reports in Jin’s head.  And just like that, he’s out on the loose again, with his sister in tow.  So…another potential complication has been swept aside, or at least transformed into something different.  Not so much of Jin being trapped until Miles could rescue him, or he rescue himself, but more of a way for him to collect Mina.

Jin’s mother seems to be increasing in importance, which also makes Jin a little more important.  Though, of course, I always get a little suspicious when randomly encountered characters turn out to be significant–it just seems too much of a coincidence.  If it’s not intentional on one side or the other, then somehow it just seems too convenient for the author…

I’m sure you can count on me for another chapter next week…why not?

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Baby!  Sweetie-doll!  So nice to see you!  You remember me, don’t you?  The Vorkosigan Saga Reread?  Yeah, yeah, the one who talks about those Bujold books, about the Vorkosigan guys.  Yeah, that’s pretty much what I’ve been up to.  Like right now, I’m doing this one called CryoBurn, which is actually the last one, about this guy named Miles who’s on this planet called Kibou-daini, hiding out with the help of a kid named Jin, but Miles’s armsman Roic has been captured, and…you know what?  It’s too complicated.  Just follow along with me.

Chapter Four

After Jin’s departure, Miles makes his way carefully back down to the basement cafeteria, realizing that he fits in better in his current tattered clothes than he would in his best.  He starts a conversation with the woman behind the counter, who says he can use whatever he wants as long as he cleans up after himself and replaces what he takes; he settles for a cup of tea.  He hears a familiar voice and sees an old man who must be Yani, grumpy and confrontational, but Miles lures him into conversation by listening sympathetically to his complaints about how things went downhill during the century he was frozen; Miles had plenty of practice with this listening to his grandfather when he was younger.  He wonders what it would be like if people from his grandfather’s generation had been frozen instead, and whether they’d hold back the tide of change when they were thawed.

When Yani starts to repeat himself, Miles ducks out to get them more tea, and chats with the cook some more.  The cook asks if he’s here because he’s sick; Miles says he has a chronic medical condition, wondering how she guessed, and then wonders what she really means by her question.  She interrupts his thought to greet a hairy man named Tenbury, who’s there to pick up his lunch; he notices Miles, who says that he’s a friend of Jin, who’s off running him an errand.  He leaves after promising to fix a leaky faucet; the cook explains that Tenbury is the custodian.  Miles, interested in the utilities feeding into the building, wonders what else he does.

On impulse, he drops Yani’s refilled teacup at his table and heads off in Tenbury’s wake, down a darkened stairwell following his quarry’s flashlight, then through a door into a similarly dark hallway lined with cryo-drawers, active ones.  He realizes that this building is a secret cryo-cooperative for the disadvantaged, which Suze and her friends have managed to keep functioning off the grid.  He wonders how much danger he’s in, if he’s liable to find himself stuffed into a cryochamber himself, frozen, alive or dead.

He knocks on Tenbury’s door, who lets him in after Miles tells him he talked to Suze that morning–omitting that it wasn’t to admit them to their community or anything.  Tenbury also asks after his health, and Miles tells him about the seizure disorder, not correcting Tenbury’s impression that he’s broke.  Tenbury shows him the cryochambers, most of which he says he keeps working by cannibalizing some of them; after twenty years they’re only 10% full, and they can keep on for decades yet, though he muses that he’ll need someone to learn his trade.

Miles still finds it odd to think of being cryofrozen voluntarily, rather than as a last resort.  Tenbury says that a lot of people don’t want to risk dying without a chance of being frozen, but he thinks the corps are pushing it a little too much; Miles agrees that this seems like a self-limiting strategy.  Tenbury notes that there are still refusers, a term that Miles hadn’t heard before, but seems obvious; he considers this a self-limiting strategy as well.  He takes Miles out to see one of the cryo-drawers.

“It seems . . . ​small,” said Miles.

“Not much head room,” Tenbury agreed. “But you’re past sitting up suddenly by the time you arrive in it. I’ve often wondered if folks would retain any memory of their time in these, but the revives I’ve met all say not.” He slid the drawer closed and gave it a fond thump to seat the latch.

“You just go to sleep, and then wake up in a future somebody else picked for you. No dreams,” Miles agreed. “Blink out, blink back in. Like anesthesia, but longer.” An intimate preview of death, and doubtless a lot less traumatic when the blink out part wasn’t accomplished by a needle-grenade blowing out one’s chest, Miles had to allow. He spread his palm on the drawer-front. “What happens to all the poor frozen people”-or frozen poor people-“if this place is discovered by the authorities?”

A brief, humorless grin ruffled the beard-thatch. “Well, they can’t just let us thaw and rot, then bury us. That’s illegal.”

Miles realizes that this makes this more of a worthwhile endeavour, then, though he notes that the law could always change; Tenbury says that at least the deaths would be painless, and he’d rather not wake up in a world like that anyway.  He then says he needs to get back to work, and Miles says he needs to go feed Jin’s animals; Tenbury gives him directions to the stairs back up, and Miles heads up to the roof, hoping Jin is back soon.

Jin is having trouble finding his way around the downtown tram station; he also wonders what’s in the thick envelope Vorlynkin gave him for Miles, but it’s sealed too securely for him to peek.  He eventually finds his way up, his thoughts turning to Miles-san and whether he’ll be properly taking care of the animals; it’s always hard to tell if adults are taking you seriously.

In his distraction, he jumps at a hand on his shoulder, which turns out to belong to a policewoman, a person he emphatically did not want to run into just then.  She asks his name and he claims to be Jin Vorkson, son of an offworlder, on an errand for his mother, but when she insists that they his mother from the security booth, he tries to make a break for it, and fails; she grabs the envelope from him, and calls for backup.  She (Michiko) and her companion (Dan) haul Jin to the booth and give him a retina scan, which turns up his real identity quickly enough; Dan notes that Jin Sato has been listed as missing for over a year.

Michiko asks him about the envelope, which Jin claims is a personal letter he’s delivering for some men; the cops take this as a warning signal, and ask for more details, which Jin refuses to provide.  They open the envelope to reveal a large chunk of cash, and a note which just says “We must trust that you know what you are doing.  Please contact us in person as soon as possible.”  They discuss whether this is about drugs, or feelie-dreams, or what.  Jin refuses to tell them more, insisting he didn’t know there was money in there; Michiko says he’s safe from the men now, and they begin making arrangements to send him home; Jin, knowing he’s screwed up big time, hopes he can keep the secrets about Suze and Ako and Tenbury and the rest, but he worries about what is going to happen to his animals.

With a grating noise and a puff of powder, the bolt popped out of the concrete.

Finally,” breathed Roic.


The frustrating part about having (or being) a young protagonist is that there is, generally, no really good reason why it has to be a young person doing these things.  Children need to be protected, after all, and shouldn’t be off risking themselves when an adult could probably do it more safely.  But adults are notoriously hard to convince about the things that kids consider to be important, having different priorities.  And when your kid is the protagonist, then, of course, their priorities are right, the adults are wrong, so therefore they become a threat, because, with the best of intentions, they will ruthlessly act for kid’s own good, as they see it, no matter what they want.  On the one hand–I know that you shouldn’t let your kid run back inside a burning house to rescue a favourite toy, or pet, or whatever.  But Michiko and Dan can’t help but come across as villains here.

Admittedly, Jin doesn’t, and can’t, tell them much, because of his illicit living situation, and I’m sure he doesn’t get much sympathy for disliking his relatives, though we haven’t met them yet, so we don’t know how much it’s justified…though I can imagine.  Should he have told them about the Barrayarans?  It would have provided a better explanation for the money and the message, but then it would have led to questions about Miles, and maybe turned the wrong kind of attention on the Barrayarans from the people whose scrutiny Miles is trying to avoid.  Are the police actually corrupt, or is it just Jin’s situation that makes him want to avoid them?  If the government’s under the thumbs of the cryocorps, then I guess they could suborn the police if they want to…

I’m not sure personally how I feel about voluntary cryo-freezing.  Yani should be a cautionary tale about the risks of being revived just to find out that things haven’t improved any.  And presumably it’s not a risk-free process, even if Kibou-daini has it down pat; it’s probably at least as risky as what we would consider routine surgery, which is to say non-zero.  In the case of incurable disease or injury, I guess I could see it as an alternative to swift and certain death, though it does presume a future where they’ve got resources to spare to heal sick people from the past, and add them to their own population.  Something like Spider Robinson’s Deathkiller, I guess.  But I’m not laying odds on that happening any time soon.  I suppose, if you just couldn’t wait for the last Song of Ice And Fire or Stormlight Archive books to be released, then you could freeze yourself for a couple of years, but then you’d find yourself having missed out on years, or decades, of life and popular culture, and these days it’s pretty much impossible to keep up with it as it is.  Okay, maybe Kibou-daini’s cultural scene is a little bit different, but we don’t get into that, do we?

Roic getting free is a great ending for a chapter, too.  Especially now that Jin’s been captured and is likely to be shipped off to his hated relatives, and Miles is stuck waiting for Jin’s return, so at least one of our characters can actually, you know, do something.  Or so we hope.

Next chapter: Roic does something?  Maybe?  Also, it won’t be next week, because Christmas and all that.  Hmmm, and the one after that is New Year’s Eve.  Maybe I’ll try for a post in the middle there somewhere, before going back to the Wednesday schedule.  Sound good?

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